Dargquon Ql'deleodna

umm... so how old is luke, and what's really going on, im not really following you at all... maybe writing more will clear some things up for me, but i ...

this is an awsome poem sponson, were did you come up with that. we are actualy "typing poems" right now so i came here to look at some good poetry ...

wow, this section was great, that guy reminds me a whole lot like van helsing; have you seen the movie, it's awsome. were di you get this idea, because it ...

wow, this is very good stuff pheonix, it would be nice if you didnt keep reposting the entire story again, why dont you save that type of stuff for when ...

i actualy beleive this to be paced perfectaly, because the elven woman wanted to leave asap so why not leave asap, it was very discriptive, and the dialouge was wellpaced ...

going a bit fast, and who got the cat o' nine tails 50 times, and the screws, wouldnt that possibly kill you, and who ever got the beating why did ...

I probably won't continue this...:( dam it, this is the first and best kick ass military stuff i have read, and you go up writ the awsome story and then ...

you spelled young like tongue just with a "y" instead of a "T" and other stuff, this is good i like the similarity of the two haiku's, you could do ...

wow, this is a very cool story, it make me wonder how he survived, yet everyone else was instantly vaorized by the heat wave, what is that thing that tried ...

this is good, but there needs to be more of it so keep writing......... and bobo, can you just bold it next time, all the colors hurt my eyes and ...

this is an awsome story jeneffina i love the plot, very new, i really like the style it was written as well, great job, there were a few spelling errors, ...

very descriptive, but it confuzed me, it sounded sort of like a wierd dream, sorta like my dreams...... could you explalin it for me i am just blown away... :?

with LOTR you can't go wrong. Sorry I couldn't critique it! i could.... i think... and yes you can go wrong..... i wont talk about that here (not the right ...

wow, this is a good peice of work, descriptive, and real, i didnt find any gramatical errors, (my grammar in being bad may be the reason for that), if this ...

this is awsome, i like the idea of a female asassin i havent read many books with one in it, only one and it was star wars lol. this is ...